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Bad Omens

          Lily had learned very early in life to trust her gut. It has kept her out of trouble and danger. From knowing that there would be a surprise pop-quiz in grade school, to anticipating the death of those around her, she’s always had a sixth sense niggling away when something was amiss. She chalked it up to being observant. But, since the car accident, she wasn’t so sure that it wasn’t something else all-together more uncanny, something more ancient than just a gut feeling
          Standing in the kitchen, she looked around and took stalk of the evidence that had greeted her that morning. Outside her kitchen window, under which the coffee pot she used every morning was plugged in, she met the owl’s unblinking gaze. She had noticed it right away, while she had spooned out the coffee grounds into the filter. Despite the bright sun streaming down on the leafless limb where the great bird sat, it was wide awake, ruffling its feathers and extending its wings, looking as if it had been waiting for her.
          The fresh container of coffee cream, just purchased the day before, was open; it’s curdled contents still in the bottom of her coffee cup. She had checked the best before date three times to make sure she was not misreading it, but there was no disputing that it signaled that the cream should have been perfectly fine for at least another three weeks.
          Lastly, on the kitchen table, were Darren’s work boots, freshly cleaned and oiled to look like new, despite their age. He had always been a stickler for taking care of his clothing but never before had he left them overnight on the table. There had been something off about their interaction that morning before he had gotten out of bed to get ready.  It had kept her awake, and sent her into the kitchen much earlier ten usual that morning. As such, she had been the one to see the owl, use the cream, and see his boots on the table before he had a chance to put them on.
          She didn’t hear so much as feel Darren enter the kitchen behind her, his socked feet whispering over the worn floorboards of their old but well-cared for home. Before he even had a chance to say good morning, if he was even planning to, Lily turned to meet him, tears building at the corner of her eyes, her voice hitching in her throat.
          “You’re leaving, aren’t you?” It wasn’t an accusation, just a simple question to which, her gut told her, she already knew the answer.
          “I know it’s Saturday. But I wouldn’t be going in if they didn’t need me.” His still wet hair fell boyishly over his face, even though it has long turned salt-and-pepper.
          “You’re leaving.”  It came out as a soft whisper, and a tear slipped down her cheek, hanging for a brief moment at her chin before falling. Darren crossed the kitchen, leaning in to kiss her forehead softly.
          “Don’t worry, sweetheart. I’ll be back in time for dinner. Your sister is coming over to help, okay? I’ll be back before you know it.” He pulled her into a hug, her fragile frame pulled tight against his still hard body. Age had not taken much from him, only added to it. He pulled away again and smiled, the crows-feet at the corner of his eyes more pronounced. “We’ll have supper together and then go to the tea shop that you love if you’re feeling up to it.”
          Darren let her go, and Lily let him let her go, as he grabbed his boots off the table and made his way to the front door. She watched, crying silently as he bent down to put his boots on, the movement less easy than it used to be, and then retrieved his keys, before leaving, closing the door behind him. The owl in the tree hooted mournfully, and Lily knew that it too knew. The final nail in the coffin sealed, Lily cried as the sound of Darren’s truck grew loud, before fading into the distance, taking him away from her for the last time.


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